
"Eidos Montréal wanted to improve its gameplay and narrative, and address criticism from fans and reviewers of Human Revolution." - this says very little.You already reference the controversy, and it's apartheid, it's going to generate debate regardless. Remove "this prompts heated debate and".Setting for Breach irrelevant for the lead."Choices" in conversations, as opposed to "options", reads better.Experience, customization and progression is enough without in game terms. I'm familiar with the series and the genre, so this is an informed review. I completed the game in January, and am working through some of the DLC, so it's fairly fresh in my memory. This is a good article, comments below will take the article beyond GA.
